Saturday, February 28, 2009

My new look! + sick:(

Do you like my new blog look? I LOVE my new profile pic! It took me about 13 pictures to find one that I liked. I'm-boo-hoo!!-sick!!! I havn't been feeling well all week and then BAM! Yesterday I actually got a fever.101.2 even though it's almost gone now, it stinks! so...yup. Nothing much to say here. I'm writing a book though! My dream is to get it published! Here's a preview for you. I'll make it short and sweet so it doesn't bug you. Also, I'm on my 5 chapter! Unlike alot of little girls, I don't write it and then give up. :)


Far away in the world of fantasy there is a school called lilac elementery school. Lilac Elementery is the home of a group of girls whose parents can't take care of them.They are from age 7 to 12 and they are called sunny day D's. The D stands for doll because if these girls have been tsted and seem perfect for the job these girls are going to be made in to lovely dolls, sold to some adorable little girls, and be loved for the rest of there life. Meanwhile they're all practicing hobbies that they're going to be known by when they become dolls. Meanwhile they have to help keep the school secret so no one will find out about it. They have Good hobbies like dancers, acrobats, cooks,writers , dog trainers, and singers to only name a few.
This story is about a particuliar girl at the age of 8 and 1/2. Her name is Lyla. Lyla has red hair, green eyes and freckels showerd all over her face. Recently Lyla's parents got in a car accident and passed away. So Lyla was sent to Lilac Elementery to become a sunny day D.
CHAPTER 1 arriving
I sat in the back of a school bus with my puppy on my lap. I was sitting all by myself. Usually I would go straight up to someone and introduce myself, but not today. Today, I was not in a friendly mood. "Two minutes 'till take off." the bus driver said. That's wierd, I thought. This isn't a rocket. All the sudden a girl about my age came running up the stairs and into the bus. Not that I was paying any attention to her in my mood of glumness. That is until she came and sat right next to me. "Cute puppy."she said. She had beautiful blond hair and a strangely cute ourfit. It was a jean jacket with a tutu under. That's all I noticed, it was all I had time to notice when suddenly, our bus started moving. "Here we go!" The bus driver said slowly. Then he laughed...really loud. I don't know why I thought that was so wierd, but I did. Maybie because a school bus driver wouldn't do something like that. I was used to quiet and strange Ms. Corky, my old bus driver. Anyway, he laughed and we stared speeding down the road. literally, speeding. Was this bus driver a mysterious theive taking us to south Africa and locking us up in a cave where we rot for the rest of our lives and always think, I shouldn't of gone in that bus? Okay, I admit, that was a little deep, but it was exactly what I thought when aaahhh! We were taking off into the air! I gripped the side of the bus, pretty much yelling my head off.

Okay that was kinda long...but I hope you liked it!! Also...Sorry about some bad spelling. My mom's going to grade it when I'm done.
Loves, Hallie

2 comments:

Ellie said...

I love the book!!!! it is way better than any of the other books i tried to write!! cant wait to read it!

AubsandKenny said...

I love your new background! Way to go on your book! :)